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Raita Kurokaji
Posts : 1074
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 34
Location : In the dark place.
| | Subject: ~Raitas Poems~ Thu Feb 10, 2011 2:11 pm | |
| Hey these are some of my old poems.
Fear
My hate burns bright with a flame as black as hate.
I wither in a corner only to seal my fate.
Nightmares scream each night at me so shrill, poised almost like a dagger aimed to kill.
I wish for life, I wish for death but neither give me host.
I am stuck between the two as if to be a ghost.
Only to wander forever beneath the darkened skies.
No truth to light the way leaves me lost in lies.
I never really came up with a name for this one but i wrote i about a friend who stabbed me in the back.
Another day another time.
I live my life, is that a crime?
What have I done and what do I do.
Did I do something to offend you?
I sit here in wonder.
I sit here and wait.
As all of my sadness turns into hate.
My tears now flow silent so no one can hear.
All of the pain and all of my fear.
Just one simple gesture.
Just one simple hug.
Maybe a simple hello or good luck.
I’ve sat here and wasted my life away.
Just to make sure that you were okay.
I always stood by you and stayed a good friend.
While you walked away from me, in the end.
Now im alone, once again, its not new.
But I will no longer waist my life on you.
You expected me to sit here and listen to you.
As you whined and complained and then yelled at me too.
Well now that I've noticed.
Now I've opened my eyes.
Yes ill admit it was quite a surprise.
But now I am done and I've had enough.
And if you ask me for help.
Well that’s to bad, tough.
My life
A life of lies.
A life of pain.
With all of this i've gone insane.
Everything that i once knew.
All of this is all so few.
I never knew what i had lost.
A memory or what it cost.
I'm falling now again i see, the darkness that wont set me free.
But now i'm reaching into light.
what is this glimmer in the night?
I see a hand reach out to me.
Is it real or trickery?
Please i'm begging
Please ill scream.
Let my nightmare become a dream.
Sinless goodbye
The complexity of the mind, irrational, confused.
Spinning round and round, we are blinded by pain and corruption.
How can we learn if we do not pay attention .
Stay calm.
Let your emotions glide away and dissapear for just a moment and see what we have long forgotten.
Watch them make their mistakes, letting their emotions take over.
Killing, destroying.
what purpose did it really serve to kill out of anger now?
How do you plan to fix it, rite, you didn't think about that did you...no you didn't.
I laugh at your corruption, you inability to think things through.
Making a mess like a child unable to think for themselves.
Planning, thinking.
The importance of this seems to be to complex for you.
And so I sit here. I sit here and laugh at you all, watching as you destroy each other.
Your pain, your sadness, your revenge as your only guide.
Goodbye. | |
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| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:06 pm | |
| Aw there nice but saddening |
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Raita Kurokaji
Posts : 1074
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 34
Location : In the dark place.
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:10 pm | |
| Yeah i usually write my poems when im angry or sad to get rid of the pain. | |
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| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:11 pm | |
| Aww that normally happens to a lot of people |
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Raita Kurokaji
Posts : 1074
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 34
Location : In the dark place.
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:15 pm | |
| my favorite one was the last one up there....which one did you like best? | |
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| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:19 pm | |
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Raita Kurokaji
Posts : 1074
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 34
Location : In the dark place.
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Wed Feb 23, 2011 6:23 pm | |
| that one...i remember how i felt when i wrote it...terrified because of a lie someone got me in trouble with. | |
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| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Thu Feb 24, 2011 5:08 am | |
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Raita Kurokaji
Posts : 1074
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 34
Location : In the dark place.
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Thu Feb 24, 2011 2:24 pm | |
| Questions
I listen to the wind. Blowing as wind does, it sounds like screams in my mind. Why screaming? I often wonder. My mind becoming like a maze that no one escapes.
Curiosity like a burden, so many questions yet none answered. Like a cat curiosity kills, I am left like prey in its wake. Why so many questions? What are we and why is life so cruel?
What does it mean to be cruel. Its all around us and even the nicest tend to fall victim to its unforgiving clutches.
How things come to pass, its the biggest question of all, full of whys and what ifs. What can we do to change it all, we can't its how it is and nothing can change it. | |
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Ichimaru Gin
Posts : 62
Join date : 2011-02-25
Age : 40
Location : Soul Society 3red Division
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Fri Feb 25, 2011 2:13 pm | |
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Raita Kurokaji
Posts : 1074
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 34
Location : In the dark place.
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Fri Feb 25, 2011 5:51 pm | |
| Guilt
mutilate my soul and drain me dry of these emotions, its times like these I can't help but cry.
My heart feels torn in a double direction, whats true or whats false.
Either way I feel helpless like a child whose yelled at their mother saying they hate her.
Words Ive said I cannot take back but feel horrible either way. What will become of my guilt? | |
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Ichimaru Gin
Posts : 62
Join date : 2011-02-25
Age : 40
Location : Soul Society 3red Division
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Fri Feb 25, 2011 6:10 pm | |
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Raita Kurokaji
Posts : 1074
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 34
Location : In the dark place.
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Tue Mar 08, 2011 12:46 pm | |
| I write these as I poor my emotions into them making myself in turn feel better. Anger and sadness. They come often for me so I need a way to filter them. That's why they're sad, angry. | |
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Lanna Kurotsuchi
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Posts : 1008
Join date : 2011-02-28
Age : 28
Location : Soul Society
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Fri Jun 03, 2011 2:04 am | |
| They're so good. I felt so much emotion from reading them, like I was there when you felt that sorrow, pain and hate. I felt on an understanding level and almost felt like I was put in your shoes and saw and felt what you did. You truly are a good poet...And an even better best friend and sister. | |
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SilverGuns
Posts : 18
Join date : 2012-03-23
Age : 31
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Sat Mar 24, 2012 5:02 pm | |
| Wow these are as dark as mine I am impressed it truly take a mature person to be able to handle such raw emotion and craft it into such a fine work of art I hope that you do not quit writing it would deprive the world of a serious talent | |
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Raita Kurokaji
Posts : 1074
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 34
Location : In the dark place.
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Sat Mar 24, 2012 5:06 pm | |
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Raita Kurokaji
Posts : 1074
Join date : 2011-01-28
Age : 34
Location : In the dark place.
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Sun Mar 25, 2012 2:41 am | |
| My new poem, just rote it tonight
Human Time Bomb
Fate
I took the bait
A never ending bruise
My hands are tied
My nerves have fried
They've all just lit the fuse.
I don't know how much more i can take
I think my time is up
My heads so full of bull
I just don't give a fuck.
I'm about to blow
I can feel it.
just one more push.
just let it go. | |
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Deidara
Posts : 16
Join date : 2011-01-30
Age : 34
Location : In the sky
| | Subject: Re: ~Raitas Poems~ Sun May 06, 2012 12:06 pm | |
| You totally need to lighten up a little yeah. | |
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